Sentence Structure Example: James BaldwinReading, you can come to appreciate sentences such as the following by James
Baldwin.
If we--and now I mean the relatively conscious whites and the relatively
conscious blacks, who must,
like lovers, insist on, or create, the consciousness of the others--do not
falter in our duty now, we may be able, handful that we are, to end the
racial nightmare, and achieve our country, and change the history of the
world.
The Fire Next Time, 1963 Baldwin takes a relatively simple thoughtIf we …do not falter in our duty …, we may be able… to end the racial nightmare. He then gracefully inserts elements and constructs
sequences of elements to extend the depth and clarity of the thought. Some of
that complexity can be suggested
by breaking the sentence into units variously indented on the page: If we --and now I mean
the relatively conscious whites
and the relatively conscious blacks,
who must,
like lovers,
insist on,
or create,
the consciousness of the others--
do not falter in our duty now,
we
may be able,
handful that we are,
to end the racial nightmare,
and achieve our country,
and change the history of the world.
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